crush, part ten (the comic you control)

alise has a new look for the dance... what will aj think? read the comic.

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art & story by:
kiki jones

you voted on part eleven and the results are in!
58% said alise should introduce chenelle to corey.
42% said alise shouldn't introduce chenelle to corey.

art & story by:
kiki jones

Comments

[Ayanna]

INTRODUCE! INTRODUCE!
Coreys like the second hottest guy at this chool so far! lull.
DO IT! Chennelle seems rully niice and sh reminds me of my friend Savannah 'speacially with that monroe, this comic reminds me of everyone i friggin know xP
BUT YEA! INTRODUCEE
Sceneish Girl + emo kid= LOVE<3

[patrixia]

in the other hand..she's pretty nice..and what chenelle said is definitely true corey is CUTE..but a he's a EmO kid i think

[snowFLAKE]

introduse 'em!!

[Kat]

got dammit, dont introduce them!!!!!!!!..
hes mine...
lol, jk

[Fira]

nooooooooooo now i kno corey is creppy but hes a sexy creepy!!she shouldn't introduce them!!

[taylyn]

um, sure introduce them, but i think something drasticly bad should go between chenelle and corey!
AJ and Alise are soo cute! is AJ cheating on her with someone else??

[Mariah]

Corey's acting like an idiot. he's trying to guilt her to go out with him. laaame.

[serena]

ohoh if alise gets corey to be with her friend she might get jelous and there is a whole bunch of drama but if she thinks it's a good idea then the whole story ends.

[Tori]

This is kinda happening inn my school. But I'm like Corey cause I'm telling her that she shouldn't of went and took her best friends boyfriend away.

[HalfJill]

In reply to Jenny's comment which was a reply to mine- Yeah I guess you're right, Alise represents the results so... the results annoy me instead, but in turn makes Alise's character frustrating to me. So I am also right? xD I vote every week, don't presume I don't. I'm a good little kiki fan *halo* loooolz.

[BB]

i like alise but she kind of reminds me of the girl in this picture. what do you think ?
http://www.glitter-graphics.com/graphics/22758

[BB]

shes gonna inrroduce them? Wow thats going to be awkward. She'd be like hi i don't really know you but this is my friend chenelle. lol
this comic is seriously awesome though.

[VONNA-C]

A.J. iS A NO NO....
COREY & ALiSE iS A HuGE YESS YESS...
COREY & CHANELLE HuGE NOO NOO...PLZ DONT MAKE THEM GO OuT...

[JOVONNA]

uHHH PERSONALLY i THiNK THAT ALiSE iZ BETTER FOR COREY BECAuSE OF THEiR STYLES.[iF THATS NOT TO CONFuSiNG]i DONT REALLY THiNK OF A.J AS A NiCE PERSON BECAuSE iF HE DiDNT LiKE KATYA THEN HE NEVER SHOuLD HAVE WENT OuT WiTH HER...SiMPLY HE JuST STARTED ALOT OF uNCALLED FOR MESS, BY EVEN GOiNG OuT WiTH HER AND THEN TuRN AROuND AND DATE HER FRiEND.BuT THEN iF iT ALL WENT DOWN THAT WAY THEN KATYA &ALiSE WASNT REALLY FRiENDS BECAuSE iF THEY WERE THEN ALiSE WOuLD HAVE KNOWN TO BACK OFF.[i HOPE iM NOT CONFuSiNG]

[raven]

lulu katya & alise were bff's a looooong time ago so it wasn't really "low" & he came 2 her not the other way around and katya new alise liked him so she was the low one thats what she gets 4 bein a jerk (p.s. i luv alise's earrings they looked like house derion lol)

[Lulu]

I'm seriously disappointed in the way people are voting for this. I'd like to point out that, in the very beginning, the majority of voters chose to go see AJ, back when Alise was Katya's bff, which is obviously a low thing to do. Then Kiki suddenly changed Katya into kind of a baddy, to justify your choice. I mean really, gURLs. Are you all backstabbing, silly people who would do anything for a hot guy?

[tokiobeliever518]

~ at firrst when i started reading this comix from the beginning it seemed kindaf interesting but throughout the weeks its gotten kindaf dull BUT i still do check out whats happening from week to week so it must not be all that boring...besides, i love the illustration(i know i spelled it wrongg i think)

[chantelle]

It sucks I can't go on this site at school. Do you know the block page says? This site is rated R. Don't even ask why.

[Yogurt Cupp]

Cant Wait For The Next One!

[Glassy Weather]

Ah, I was not here for some time... and things happened... And uh, I have to say that all votings , except this one, are the ones I would not choose xD.
I don't think that Alise should be with Corey one day... in my opinion they just don't suit. However, I hope their relations will become warmer and turn into friendship later =).
Though, I also dislike the fact that she is going out with AJ =/. I mean, hey, he just dumped his girlfriend, he should take a break! If not for himself, he should do this for Katya, who (again - in my opinion only) was not fair for Alise when starting a relationship with AJ, and who I don't like, BUT! does the fact that rude people exist means that we also should be rude?
Anyway - I hope the new girl's intentions are good and she will not do something lousy to Alise... I don't like Alise that much, but she's still a main character and I'm quite attached to her...

Sorry if there ware langugae/grammar mistakes in this post, but it's quite late here and I'm a little bit tired, so writing in english is becoming difficult ^^''.

[ivana]

i think corey is more alise type she should dump aj and Chanelle should go out with aj.... HMMMM......

[Mint]

I have to say the girl ake Alise look strange for the dance.. xp
But anyway, I think she should introduce them..

[Jessica]

She should introduce them to each other.
A bigger social group means Corey would have to be more aware of his ridiculous, selfish behaviour, and generally interacting with others helps to increase awareness and allows for change. (:
So there is hope for him! ;D

[anuska]

& I forgot to say ... I think you are not right when you tell that Alise is stupid for choosing the hot guy ... & you say he will dump her like his ex ... but maybe Alise knows the risk & still goes with him ... & yes, they look happy ...

[anuska]

Well I think AJ is the one for Alise ... They are in love so what do you want ... they should be happy ... And maybe Corey needs love so I think it's good idea Chanelle to meet Corey ...

[Not your business.]

These people think Corey is a better person to Alise. Why people liked Corey? Is it because of the "emo style" he had? On how you think AJ will simply dump Alise is = on how you judge Corey being a cool person because of appearance and being ""cute,"" if there were such persons who think like that. I think Corey would continue being a balance of story but some people here were too exagerrated. :/
If somebody was offended in this post, this is my view and don't be carried away. ;D

[Gracie May]

laugh.my.ass.off. Kiki...that was amazing. This girl chenelle or whatever, shes funny. I didn't expect that at all. XD She should introduce 'im. :] *and yes ive reilized the votes in but I dont care :P* Maybe Corey needs a lil love in his life? <3

[Sere]

Hm...Well, I must say, my vote is for Corise (CoreyxAlise). I knida think that Chenelle anad Aj should end up together too actually.

Shame I keep missing the voting. Oh well. Just gotta try again sometime.

[Lemon]

Ok, so here's what happens. Alise introduces C to Corey, and she gets jealous about how much they're hitting it off!

ALISE+COREY!!!!!!!! Who cares about AJ?

[Jenny]

um HalfJill(and all you other Alise haters), for your information. most of the decisions that Alise made were based on the votes.(which you may or may not have voted)SO if you really think she should have gone for Corey, THEN VOTE!

[HalfJill]

Alise is starting to annoy me.

She's so typical. Choosing the 'hot' guy who would dump his current girlfriend for anyone new who catches his eye. Being rude to the boy who just wanted to warn her about something, even if he was going to make her skip class... which I think it was to make her avoid the bullying anyway...

I'm starting to think Corey deserves better.

[sarah]

aww...corey is so cute, I feel bad for him. and I really don't like alise...shes kinda dumb for thinking aj is just gonna take her and be fine with it and forget about whatshername, his ex. lol. but whatevz

[Diana]

OMG i cannot believe dat alise didnt notuce dat corey likes her i mean he is totally into her and she blinded by aj and i think she should introduve them wat would she look like telling Chanelle no wen chanell came 2 her rescue!!!!!!!!!!

[woah]

OM FREAKIN G i cannot believe how stupid alise is um stupid COREY LIKE U!!!!!like her outfit though ...cute. anyways i voted 2 late lets get some action in this comix peoples geez make Corey confess his love!!!!lolz

[gerardine]

tisk tisk tisk, and i thought alise would have him, but no chenelle gunna get him.

i really think alise is waytoo over dressed, and a.j., i dont trust a.j. at all.

[omg]

darn it i got here to late i wanted to vote but i didnt get to the results are in man but i still think she should introduce him to corey just not let her go out with him BEACAUSE COREY LIKES U ALISE GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Karen]

What is up with corey? Why did he say "Having fun alice?" If you ask me the guy needs a shrink.But i thnk corey and chennele are still perfect for eachother. I wonder if there is going to be a kiss at the end. or a fight. or an argument. or a stare-in the eyes moment. or a....

[Yumi :)]

I wish I was in the comic. ;)

[Arienette]

Chenelle and Corey would be sooo cute.
I love your animation style, you're amazing!

[Becky]

wow...and i'm like mean WOW! I still wish Corey and Alise should go out...ah well but introduce thm anyway...coz at least Corey will have someone...:D Amazing comix, keep it up! :P

[Elena.]

...i want corey and alise to be together!!!..i think a.j is one of those jerkss that only want onee thing---
YAHH!! and i think coreyy actually likes her..a LOT.....i dont know what she should say to hr freidn though.....thats kinda mean...
but oh well!!

[morgan]

she should

[Emzi]

Chenelle is awsome and corey would probley be quite cute. They should go out cause even though alise doesn't really like him hes not that bad.

[Aleixs]

"Having fun Alice?"

xD I'm sorry- I thought she was going to do an anime punch(a punch where they/fall, but don't really get hurt.) then turn back to AJ and bee all ^^.

xD

[amanda]

Corey likes Alicia!
But maybe he should go out with Chanelle. Maybe that would make Alicia jealous, and she would realize she likes Corey back. Cause to be honest I just don't like AJ. I really don't.
But then again, doing that might mess up her new friendship with this Chanelle.
Argh. It'll be interesting to see how this all turns out.

[Lauren, rc]

mmh this is really starting to pull it's self together...making more and more sense as it goes along...but how much longer will this last? can't wait for the grand finally!! =]

[loveyah]

I think Alise should introduce Chanelle to Corey. Someone for everyone, right? But i think Corey likes Alise beacuse how else do you explain how hes acting unless he likes the guy she is going out with. But i dont think thats possible cuz he didnt act like that with the other mean her that the other guy dumped. Hopefully, Corey will get over Alise and go out with Chanelle! And Alise and that other guy (forget name) can go out.

[Bri]

I agree with Art Freakk below. She should.

[boodie]

alise needs to stay with aj she wanted him forever
chenelle needs to be with corey they are made for eachother look at them
alise and aj look happy

[xXisyXx]

ok wow make like 50 page ones even if there r only one sentence per page plz try!!!!!!!lol \m/ rock on!!