crush, part eleven (the comic you control)

will chenelle and corey hit it off? read the comic.

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art & story by:
kiki jones

you voted on part twelve and the results are in!
49% said alise should approach aj and katya.
51% said alise avoid them and return to corey and chenelle.

Comments

[ermm . annyo :P]

Girl: OMG like you juss totally jizzed all over my back, where the fuck did you throw my panties ?

Boy: I flicked dem out da window bitch now shut the fuck up!

:D dont you juss love that XD

[Noelle]

I know Im totally psyched to see what KiKi came up with!!!!!!!x10000

[Tokka]

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IT'S TOMORROW!!!!!! THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO FOR THE PAST THREE WEEKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DUDE I AM SOOOOOOO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD YAY YAY THANK YOU KIKI!!!!

[Jae]

i love this comic thing. I wish there was a new one everyday. its so awesome. well i cant wait 4 the next one.

[Niki]

OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD!!!!! TOMORROOOOOWWWW!! I can't wait until TOMORROOOOWWWW!! GAAAAHHH I CAN'T WAITT!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love alise's outfit, BTW! I think alise and Corey should be together

[Lauren]

i cant wait 2 c wat happens. she shud go and confront aj. also, i want 2 know wat happened with corey

[DFS]

U DUMB TWATS VOTED FOR HER TO GO BACK! WE NEED SOME FREAKING DRAMA!!!

[Martie]

OMGZ IT'S ALMOST WENSDAY!!! YAY!!!!!

[Jessica]

Oh and (I just saw the votes ARGH slowness)...
Alise should confront the coward blond guy, and this time ask HIM wth is going in, instead of him being all "Oh I thought you didn't know that guy??"

(And yeah I think she seriously needs to cut her hair... Her prom look is freaky.)

[Jessica]

Gawd. Can't Katya and her sidekicks just buzz off. They won't leave AJ alone for a freakin' second, as though he's their only hope to keep them "popular"! *worked-up* Oh and those horrible gaudy colours soOo don't match their skin. *glares at them*

Sigh. I hope Corey doesn't mind Chenelle's nosiness. >_>

[Kylie]

so elise shoudl punch katie in the face....dump Aj...save Cory and realize that the 'new' friend of hers is a fake ass bitch...and she sooo should have skipped last comic...that pisses me off severly!!!!

well Corey is soo sweet i like love him!!!!!!! wow

too bad this is comming to an end....waiting breathlessly!

[Jae]

I liked it. I think Corey might think that Chenelle is a little irritating for asking so many questions. But I want to know why Corey was in the hospital, I just started reading so if they said why in a different one i missed it.

[Amz]

I LOVE the Crush series, and Kiki, I think you are a Totally AWSOME drawer. you rock!! and I like how you have drawn Corey and AJ, They are both cute lol xx

[MysteryGirl101]

they were different by 2%???!!!???!!!???? That is SOOO not fair! I think she should approach them and slap A.J. hard in the face! I can't believe she's not gonna approach them in the final! Grrrrr....... who voted that she should stay?!? *shakes fist at sky*

[MysteryGirl101]

I think that Katya should spot Alise, than pull A.J. towards her and kiss him. Then Alise should burst into tears when she see's that A.J. isn't trying to pull away from Katya and run outside. Then Chennelle and Corey spot her and run after her. She sit's alone outside while Corey and Chennelle comfort her and tell her to just forget about A.J. and that awful Katya. Then a Corey ask's Alise to dance while Chennelle talks to a guy next to the wall. Alise sticks out her toughne at Katya and A.J. when she passes them with Corey. Then Corey and her kiss at the end of the dance while staring passionately into each-others eyes. Then Alise goes over and slaps A.J. hard on the face and pushes Katya into a wall where she bumps her head REALLY hard! Then she and Corey kiss again while they walk out of the school, holding hands, while chatting with Chennelle and her new friend. Then all is well and happy! THE END!

[jalissa-renee]

i think that she should go out wit corey
they might belong together
who knows

[norirdina]

cool comic.i'm dying to know what will happen!!!:)

[cecilia]

This is a great comic.
I love the art.
I think that Alise has every right to go after what she wants.
If Corey is just going to play head games, he isn't worthy of her attention.

[emiLe]

aww 49% vs. 51%?! why?! have you guys forgotten that the main story is that alise had wanted to always be with a.j?? >__> and i think you guys are judging corey too much. saying he should be with alise. nothing really developed between those too. you guys are just saying that by appearance. and also with a.j. how can you guys say his bad? he hasn't done anything either. his only asked alise out and confessed he likes her. and alise likes him. why must you guys twist the story up. when the main point was for alise to be with a.j. T^T *sigh* oh well. kiki will figure something out.

[emiLe]

ok who the hell is complaining about waiting like.. a week for the next comic? didn't you guys read the last page of the comic in part 11? she has school! school just started. SHE HAS A LIFE! just be happy she is making this comic. so why whine about it? plus its the final chapter and she promised to make it good. you guys don't have any appreciation for her work. shes not gonna wanna draw for people who can't see she has a life away from the computer. SO RELAX!

[kandy]

omg.
alise should so end up with corey!
aj shouldnt even talk to that slutbackwhore.
lol. ya i bet sum people r snickering about that....but she SHOULD BE WIT COREY.
....wow. this means ive said to much. i watch this show a little too much.....im gonna watch the secret life of an american teenager now....

[Kit Minx]

why hasn't the new comic come out when it has been almost two weeks since the last one came out... and it says they come out every Wednesday each week.

[brianna]

pleezee hurry

[Jade]

Alise and Corey forever Corey is so hot I wish there were guys like him at my school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVING COREY

[Corey-Gurl]

I think that AJ should kiss Kayta right there... becuase liking Alise was just a scam and Alise runs outside, when she feels Corey hugging her, and then she stops crying in amazment and Corey kisses her for a long time and she kisses back. Chennele is then engulfed by boys, and is happy with them. Corey ends up with Alise, and AJ and Kayta stay together. Aj is not that cute, BTW... GO COREY AND ALISE <3!

[luva]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!
WHY DO WE HAVE 2 WAIT THAT LONG JUST 2 READ THE NEXT 1..!!!!????????!!!
THAT IS TOTTALLY NOT COOL AT ALL!!!!!!!

[amphys]

Katya's friends would whisper to her that Alise's in sight. Then before Alise could get any closer, Katya pulls AJ..ending up to a total kiss!!!

Then, Alise drowns to tears and runs to Chenelle but seeing Chenelle and Corey busy and with all the people bumping her, she rushed out of the party crying. She runs and goes to a spot where she sits alone..crying then all of a sudden, feels warn arms around her she looks and sees Corey!!!

Then she tried to free herself but the more she did, the tighter the embrace became..the more she cried. Corey embraced her till she stopped crying and calmed down.

And then..I don't know,gtg..still have to do my thesis.

[julietaw]

i don't want the sires to win

[Lydia]

I think Katya should be trying to get AJ back, then the 2 girlz get in a fight over AJ! Alise wins, with Katya running away with her freinds to the bathroom. Then AJ and Alise finally kiss. Then Corey and Alise's other friend finally go on a date and really get to know each other, then they kiss at the end. And all is happy until a very angry and very bloddy nose Katya enters and decides to finish Alise off once and for all. But AJ steps in when it gets rough and tells Katya off. Then they all live happily eva after while Katya moves to a trailer park in Wisconsen and becomes a hippie! THE END! (The last part u don't really have to do, but it's a suggestion! ;))

[jasmine]

Alise chould stay away from Katya, and trust AJ to stay away from her, and Alise should ask for Chenelle's help with Katya. The two can take that bitch on.;)

[Maeve]

Woah...Corey was - i think - depressed? Harsh...but kinda obvious seeing as he's the emo kid and stuff...
I don't think he should tell Chanel his story, I think he should tell it to Alise because they're, in a way, better suited for each other!

[nina]

i think she should approach a.j. and katya she's a bitch and is trying to get him back!!!!!!!!

[mao]

as of now i want corey and chenelle together.
cause corey looked rlly sad and about him being sick and all...and chenelle was listening and talking t him..
whereas the whole time in this comic alise hasent even been nice to corey AT ALL.

[Holly]

Hm...I wonder if Corey is like sick with something serious. I like him and think he's sweet so I'm hoping he's not hurt or anything, but that was the first thing i thought...like he was having chemo or something.

[amanda]

I'm not sure if AJ is cheating or not, but I know Corey is WAY better then AJ in my opinion. I'm still stuck on the Corey/Alice, and even if the comic doesn't even that way, I'll still be stuck on it.

[mayra]

heyy what happend to numero 12? im like so carzy for this i cant waitt!! please hurryy :DD

im really starting to like thiss :DD

yayy kikii

[HalfJill]

Did no one else notice AJ's annoyed expression?

He wasn't cheating.

But I'm actually glad she's going back to Corey and Chanelle. =]

[Naomi]

alise should approach aj and katya.

[Kristin]

that biyatch katya

[Kristin]

omg that stupid katya i hate her and i feel so totally sorry 4 corey and i think A.J. likes katya again oh nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Miosha]

OhMyGoshhh!!
Noo!
AlicexAJ Foreverr!!
Who knows, that little hussy of a Katya might have just bombarded him!
I Love AJ!!!

[hannah]

i think corey is WAY hotter than AJ... lol. seriously, alise needs to go tell AJ off, he's obviously cheating

[*brie*]

Y DO U AHVE TO GO????? these r awesome...

alise needs to tell katya off.. a.j wants alise!!!

[angieangieange]

Alise can't seriously be that stupid. AJ is probably playing her, Corey likes her, and Katya is.. obviously.. a slut and a half! ORRRR
Alise has to stop acting stupid and go up to AJ and Katya and pull AJ aside and ask him what he's doing with Katya! Then, Corey needs to go back to the hospital bc he's still sick or whatever. Chenelle will be heartbroken, then get over it, then get a new crush in 5 seconds. And Katya can go fall in a ditch :D

[tokiobeliever518]

~ Alise should totally go back to corey and chennelle before corey starts changing his mind about the way he feels about alise because chennelle and corey look like theyre about to hit it off. besides, i dont think that a.j. and katya will ever be over each other, they'll just be on and off. alise is just confused and she needs to make up her mind whether she wants a.j. or corey because no ones going to wait for her....

[ashley]

omg! that katya will never give up! a.j. is too good for her! i want alise and katya to be in a catfight at the dance. that would be entertaining.

[ashley]

ahhh! i love this comic ^_^
I want her to go up to them! why wouldnt u want them to work out. Katya is really mean
D= she should go get eatin by a cow.

[Jill]

49% vs. 51%?! GAH. We are split down the middle. The only fair thing would be, well, both. Kiki'll figure it out. I get the feeling she's a pretty smart chicka. Props.

[WHAT THE HEAK!!!!!!]

how dare you guys vote for her not to go to aj she is taking her man but then again i think she should go with corey beacause evreyone says aj is gay

[chantelle]

oh come on, i wanted to see a cat fight. who ever voted to run away is lame.