crush, part three (the comic you control)

hooking up with a friend's boyfriend can lead to trouble. read the comic.

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art & story by:
kiki jones

you voted on part four, and the results are in!
72% said alise should run after the mystery boy.
28% said alise should continue talking to aj

Comments

[patrixia]

haha..GO GurL!
but be creful..(kilig aQ!)

[jjjj]

I bet you anything that guy is obsessed with the guy's girlfriend that's why he's mad and gonna kill himself lmao.

[Madison]

AJ to me looks a bit like Sonic the Hedgehog....weird............

[Jessica]

LOL @ "CRASH thud thud thud"!

[Jenny]

lol, I think emo kid is Slide'd stalker, but seriously is it just me or does AJ look like a girl in the last scene?

[lool ;D]

oooo exciting!! ;D i cant wait for the nxt one. i think that alise shuld date a.j for a bit , but the realise what a 'jerk' he is nd break up with him. so then everyone hates him [MUAAHHAHA!] nd alise runs off to the totally hot 'emo' guy nd they become the prefect couple! oh. nd katya nd alise rnt frends anymore. alise finds sum new better ones. ;D

[alondrah]

awww
this is a cut comic, i just started reading it x]
i hope she falls for the guy with the lip stud
he sounds better than the AJ dude <.

[Azalea Montenegro]

AJ really reminds me of the typical douche bag scene kid. Who everyone thinks is so cool and cute but in the end, he turns out to be a jerk. I agree with most, she does deserve better. Looks arent always everything. I mean yeah he's hot but thats so artifical/superficial as well. When will she realize? That Emo guy was extremly adorable. . . i feel bad for him. She should give AJ all the right signals, then turn down AJ and fall for the other dude in time ;]

[Cool]

OMG!Great comix!
More More More plzzzz!

Also I for one think that she should gor for it.Katya is no friend so why not?and it would make the cmiz more interesting.As for the Emo kid,lets say hes just spying on Alise and AJ for Katya,and Katya is making a plan to hurt her for going out with him........or something like that!Just make more comix!!I CAN READ THEM ALL DAY!

[demonicplague]

omg go after the emo dude
he was hott!!!!!!
and he had a lip ring!!!
actually she should just leave him alone so i can have him!!! lolz

[peachez]

i think she should sneek around with aj and then get pregnant by him!!! then katya finds out about it and so does aj then he dosent want to take care of it ...then the emo dude ends up takin care of it

[Poison]

how dare u take my name! im poison not u!!!
any way AJ bettr b nice!

[Poison]

If AJ did that to Katya, he can do the same thing to Alise.
She deserves more than himm. ¬_¬
[Even though he looks mega hott.]

And I think she should folow the 'emo' dude.

[lexii]

she should keep with aj i mean there having a great convo anyway

[Alex]

I think alise should kick aj to the curb and go after the emo and ask him why he was spying on them then the emo should tell alise that he loves her then they get together. Aj sees them in the hall making out and he goes gay an tries to steal the emo from alise.

[sunny sparks]

i think that alise should kick aj's behind to the curb and find out if the rocker dude likes her.

[Mzcheer4lyfe93]

I think da emo guy should b da boyz ex boi friend so wen dey go chase him she findz out dat he use 2b gay!! lol

[Nannie]

well Cloe,

we don't now mr emo guys name so its just so that we can identify him, personally I think the whole emo thing is silly actually I think most labels a silly but thats because I really can not be labeled as anything, because I am into so many different things and have so many social groups

[cloe]

u is all labelers. where in the comic does it say the uber-cute guy is EMO??? not all people wearin those clothes r emo. so there. but yes. a.j. is totally messin with her. maybe her old best friend told a.j. to mess with her. but alise should end up with uber-cute dude. cause they would look so AHHH-DORABLE together!!!!!! =D

[Shan]

Okay, in my opinion Alise should kick AJ's behind to the curb(and also to other side of curb lol)because he is totally fooling around with her emotions and as for the emo boy I think he has special feelings about her.

[Taylor]

I didn't find this comic as grabby as the last parts. Alise should keep her feelings slightly conceiled, as this guy could turn out to like her, and then she would be caught in a nerving love-triangle and then it would be more gripping.

[PoisonGirl]

Alyse should tell A.J. to fuck off, he's obviusly a player and she'd be way too stupid to fall for him. Plus, the mysterious stranger is way hotter than A.J. and has probably had a huge crush on Alyse forever but never told her. A.J. and Katya are two nasty people who deserve each other, Alyse deserves better, and the quiet, cute guys usually are.

But then again, it's just a comic, so whatever. Kiki knows best :P

[korkey]

I think the emo guy & Alise are ganna end up being together && i have no clue what'll happen to A.J. or Kayta..but yea.

[Julie]

I think that Alise should date him. Doesn't matter about her friend, she betrayed her first a anyway, and for the emo kid, he dohuld soooooooooo be in LOVE with alise.

[victoria]

alise should say to aj "i like you but, your dating my friend and i really don't wanna be a trator (even know kayta turned on me) and you need to go back to her too." then he smiles and leaves but is still angry. then she goes to that emo kid and he tells her that he loves her. and then katya finds them kissing in the hallway, and tells aj right away. and katya is soo happy for alise while aj is upset, and furious at the guy. and alise liked the emo kid more thats why i said that she should tell aj to back off in the beggining of my message. so she should go with the emo kid.

[Sarah]

I think the emo guy should be and be in love with aj. and aj is trying to hide that he is having feelings for the emo guy by hitting on alise.

[samm]

ok so the cute emo sooo likes Alise remember he dropped his books when he hears whats their saying. Any wanys i think that Alise goes after him and he tells her that he loves her and she doesnt have to be with AJ (even if he is a nice guy...)anyways i want her to go get that emo lol love it >.<

[amderlynyn]

i think that if it realy was someone a.j knew he should of told her so thier relashions ship dosent start off on a lie

[Elena.]

I want AJ to be a good guy, that he really likes Alise and is not ashamed, even if hes a popular boy. And Katya will turn out as Alise's enemy...but they never really were friends cause Katya knew Alise REALLy liked Aj..and Katya dated him!! U know shes a trator..And that AJ dated Katya..for X reason ( no idea) but he really liked Alise!

[LiiSA]

i think that the punk/emo kid should turn out to be a secret admierer of alise! but Aj doent like it and he thretens him.

ps. sry about me spelling. i cant really spell lol

[Megan]

I think the emo kid should turn out to be related to a.j in some way and tell alise the truth that he is just using her to embarass herself in front of everyone! Then alise will start to go out with him!

[thedevilqueen]

i think , well u see most of u said that aj should be a jerk and all, but thats so typical i think aj should trun out to be a good guy who really likes katya, and he falls inlove with her, and then they date for a hile of course the best friend will hate jatya's guts and will try to make her life a living hell, but Aj cant help her much couse he's a popular kid and he doesnt wanna lose her reputation, altho he really is inlove with her, then the emo kid shows up and tries to comfort her and they become best friends and during a fight between katya and aj cuz she caught him flirting the emo guy fights with aj and declares his love.. and they date

[Callie]

i think the emo kid should like her and but she does kiss the her best friends boyfriend. then she tells her best friend what happens, and she breaks up with him and then she finds out she was cheating on her with a lot of girls... and then alise should realzie what a jerk he was.... and then the emo guy should ask her out!!

[kiki]

emo guy! emo guy!

[kendra]

i think that the emo kid likes alice and has been watching her for a long time and she didnt know and AJ is just trying to sleep with her and when alice's best friend find out AJ will lie and say that alice is the one who came up to him and the best friend will believ AJ not alice because thats what happens when girls are in love....then alice will have no one else and will try to get with the emo kid who is also hurt because of what he saw and he liked alice for a long time...thats my own opinion!!!!1

[Ly]

maybe they stay there and the emo kid runs off and tells Katya what's going one >:D

[raven]

"i think its a trick and katya will come out and smack alise" lol <3

[Cami]

The emo boy should have a crush on AJ!
Fab idea.

[ewdtryfh]

i think its a trick and katya will come out and smack alise

[Kiera]

although, i would feel so sorry for alise. i think that it would be an interesting if her and aj actually sleep together, because katya won't do it with and aj is able to tell that alise likes him. then, aj should leave alise, and spread the whole rumor around school. alise would hate him afterwards, and katya would find out. then, when alise's life is falling apart at school the emo kid (whoever that is) will cheer her up, and support her, and they'll wind up going out. but i would feel bad, however it would be so interesting.

[mad4u]

i think the emo kid luvs her...

[Kalz]

I think the emo kid would be better for Alise. Aj has a girlfriend.. what if he does what he did to Katya to Alise?

[Ashley]

i think that other emo kid liked her... :-)

[Krista]

Oh whoops, I meant to say Alise's best friend, lol. I got their names mixed up.

[Krista]

To me AJ is a douchebag, and so is his girlfriend, aka Katya's best friend. BITCHES DATE JERKS! So she should just trash AJ and go after the other emo guy.

[kristen pollick (15 yr old)]

OMIGOSH! wat if A.J. was just in it to hurt her?? maybe Kayta forced A.j. to hurt her!!!!

[Nannie]

I'm glad Alice had the courage to tell A.J. about liking him, AND I think her "BEST FRIEND" IS A BITCH because what best friend would go out with a guy she nows you've liked forever, Katya is no real Friend

mmm and I think that emo kid we just saw was one of A.J.'s friends or something like that and I don't think A.J. really noticed her before something was said....but this Part is just speculation

[Audrey]

k guys look at this rationally.first of all aj hasnt even broken up with his gf yet that should be a red flag right there,second it would be kinda mean 2 brake up with his gf and then go out with her former bff and third mabey that kid just likes alice and doesnt want 2 see her get hurt,i mean does every1 have 2 make him seem like a stalker?

[Lara]

This is amazing!SHE TOLD HIM!!!!!!!!!!!SHE TOLD HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dark]

I think Alice should follow the guy (and seemed he liked her ;D)...oh, maybe this new guy is AJ's brother and he liked Alice, and he knows that AJ is playing her and trying to make the new guy jealous because Alive likes Aj and not him? Or something like that?